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The most common selection criteria in Australian government jobs test communication, teamwork, problem solving, organisational skills, leadership, stakeholder management, and attention to detail. Each response should use the STAR method — Situation, Task, Action, Result — and be 250 to 400 words. Use a specific real workplace example, quantify your results wherever possible, and write in the first person.
If you have ever stared at a government job application and wondered where to start, you are not alone. Selection criteria responses trip up thousands of otherwise qualified applicants every year — not because they lack the skills, but because they do not know how to demonstrate them effectively. This guide gives you the 7 most common criteria in Australian government roles, explains what assessors are looking for, and provides a fully worked STAR example answer for each one. Use them as models, not templates — your response must reflect your own genuine experience.
Selection criteria are specific capability statements that Australian government and public sector employers require applicants to address in writing. Unlike a private sector resume, where your work history speaks for itself, government applications ask you to prove you meet each criterion by providing structured written evidence. Each criterion is scored separately by an assessment panel, which means a weak response to even one criterion can eliminate an otherwise strong application.
For more background on how the selection process works, see our complete guide to writing government selection criteria in Australia and our overview of government job selection criteria across all levels of Australian government.
While every role is different, the following seven criteria appear — in various phrasings — across the vast majority of APS, state government, and public sector applications in Australia. For each, we explain what assessors are looking for and provide a full STAR example answer written in the first person, based on realistic Australian workplace scenarios.
Assessors want evidence that you can tailor your communication style to different audiences, convey complex information clearly, and achieve an outcome through your communication — not merely that you are a 'good communicator.' Strong responses demonstrate a specific situation where the communication challenge was real and the outcome was measurable.
In my role as a Grants Administration Officer with the Department of Communities, I was responsible for notifying approximately 80 community organisations of significant changes to grant acquittal requirements following a policy revision. Many of these organisations were small, volunteer-run groups with limited administrative capacity, and several had English as a second language. I was tasked with developing and delivering a communication strategy that ensured all organisations understood the new requirements before the deadline. I drafted a plain-language summary of the changes and prepared a one-page FAQ document addressing the questions I anticipated. I also developed translated fact sheets in three languages in consultation with our multicultural affairs colleagues and delivered a webinar for all grant holders, followed by individual outreach to the twelve organisations that had not acknowledged receipt. As a result, 100 per cent of organisations submitted compliant acquittals by the deadline — compared with a 74 per cent compliance rate under the previous requirements. The Director specifically commended the communication approach as a model for future policy rollouts.
This criterion looks for evidence that you actively contribute to collective outcomes, support colleagues, and manage interpersonal dynamics constructively. Assessors are not looking for general claims about being a 'team player' — they want a specific example that shows what you personally contributed to a team effort and what difference it made.
While working as a Project Coordinator at the Australian Taxation Office, I was a member of a cross-functional team delivering a digital portal upgrade that would affect approximately 200,000 registered users. The team of seven included staff from policy, technology, communications, and service delivery, each with competing priorities and different working styles. My role was to coordinate the project schedule and maintain alignment across workstreams. When it became clear mid-project that the technology and communications streams were operating on different timelines, I facilitated a joint planning session, produced a revised integrated schedule, and established a weekly check-in to surface blockers early. I also volunteered to take on additional documentation tasks when a colleague went on personal leave, ensuring we did not fall behind. The portal launched on time and within budget, and user satisfaction scores on the new portal were 28 per cent higher than on the previous system. The team was recognised in an agency-wide innovation award for collaborative delivery.
Government employers want to see that you can identify the root cause of a problem, not just its symptoms, and that you can develop a practical, evidence-based solution. The best responses show structured thinking, initiative, and a result that demonstrates the solution actually worked.
In my position as a Data Analyst with a state health department, I identified a significant discrepancy in our monthly performance reporting that was causing funding allocation decisions to be based on inaccurate data. While preparing a routine report, I noticed that one regional health network had been consistently under-reporting emergency presentations due to a data entry mapping error introduced during a system migration. I escalated the issue to my manager and proposed a targeted audit of the affected data series. Working with the IT team, I identified the root cause — a misconfigured field mapping in the ETL pipeline — and collaborated with the regional network to correct historical records going back 14 months. I then developed a validation rule that would flag similar anomalies automatically in future reporting cycles. The corrected data resulted in a reallocation of $1.2 million in funding to the affected region, and the validation rule has since prevented three similar discrepancies from entering production reporting.
Assessors need evidence that you can manage multiple tasks simultaneously without dropping the ball, that you prioritise effectively under pressure, and that you communicate proactively when timelines are at risk. Government roles often involve heavy and fluctuating workloads, and assessors want to know you can navigate this.
As a Policy Officer at the Department of Employment in Canberra, I regularly managed simultaneous briefs for multiple senior executives with urgent and competing deadlines. In one particular quarter, I was required to prepare four ministerial briefs, contribute to a whole-of-government policy review, and support the preparation of Budget Estimates documentation — all within a six-week window. I developed a structured workplan for each deliverable, mapping deadlines back to identify the key milestones I needed to hit each week. I communicated proactively with each executive about progress and flagged early when I identified a conflict between two brief deadlines and the Budget Estimates schedule. In consultation with my manager, I negotiated a revised timeline for one brief and co-opted a colleague to assist with a section of the policy review. All four briefs were delivered on time, the Budget Estimates documentation was completed two days before the deadline, and the policy review contribution received positive feedback from the Deputy Secretary.
Leadership criteria are not limited to formal management roles — assessors look for evidence that you have guided, influenced, or motivated others, taken initiative to drive change, or stepped up in a challenging situation. If you have never held a people management role, draw on examples of informal leadership such as leading a project, mentoring a colleague, or driving a process improvement.
I was appointed as acting APS5 Team Leader at Services Australia while our substantive team leader was on extended leave, responsible for a team of six service delivery officers processing income support claims. When I took on the role, the team had a backlog of 340 claims beyond the 21-day processing target, and morale was low following a period of sustained workload pressure. I met individually with each team member during my first week to understand their concerns and any blockers affecting their productivity. I then redesigned the team's daily workflow, introducing a triage system that prioritised claims by complexity and urgency, and implemented a brief daily huddle to surface blockers in real time. Within six weeks the backlog had been cleared, and the team achieved its best-ever monthly processing rate. Two team members noted in their mid-year reviews that the structured workflow and regular communication had significantly improved their confidence. The backlog has not recurred in the eight months since.
This criterion tests your ability to manage complex relationships across organisational boundaries, resolve tensions between competing interests, and build trust with people who have different agendas. Strong responses show that you understand stakeholders as more than just recipients of information — you engage them, manage their expectations, and use the relationship to achieve better outcomes.
As a Contract Manager for a state government agency overseeing a $3.8 million community services contract, I managed a complex stakeholder environment that included the contracted service provider, three peak body organisations, the responsible minister's office, and multiple internal business units with differing expectations about contract performance. Early in the contract period, the service provider and one peak body held conflicting views about the service delivery model, which was creating tension that risked the contract's outcomes. I organised a structured facilitation session bringing both parties together with the relevant internal policy team to resolve the interpretation differences. I prepared a position paper in advance that clarified the contractual obligations and presented both interpretations fairly. The session produced an agreed service delivery protocol signed off by all parties. Contract performance improved in the following quarter, and the minister's office reported no further escalations from the peak body. The approach was subsequently documented as a case study in the agency's contract management guidance.
Government work involves decisions that affect people's lives, public funds, and legislative compliance. Assessors for this criterion want proof that you check your work rigorously, identify errors others miss, and understand the consequences of inaccuracy. Generic claims about being thorough are not enough — you need a specific example where your attention to detail produced a meaningful outcome.
While working as a Grants Assessment Officer at the Australian Research Council, I was reviewing a batch of 47 research grant acquittal reports prior to payment processing. During my review, I identified that three reports from separate institutions contained budget variances that had been carried forward incorrectly from the previous reporting period — an error not flagged by the submitting organisations or their finance teams. Rather than proceeding with approval, I cross-referenced each report against the original grant agreements and the prior year's acquittal, confirmed that the variances exceeded the permitted threshold, and raised formal queries with each institution. In two cases, the institutions acknowledged accounting errors and resubmitted corrected reports. In the third case, the review revealed an unreported change in project scope that required a formal variation approval. My attention to detail prevented approximately $86,000 in potentially non-compliant payments from being processed and ensured all three grants remained fully compliant with ARC funding rules.
The standard length for an Australian government selection criteria response is 250 to 400 words per criterion, unless the application specifies a different word or page limit. Always read the instructions carefully — some agencies cap responses at half a page or one page per criterion, while others provide a combined word limit across all criteria. Exceeding the stated limit is grounds for automatic rejection at many agencies and signals poor attention to instructions.
A good selection criteria response uses the STAR method to walk the assessor through a specific real example from your work history. It should be written in the first person, use the exact language of the criterion where possible, quantify the result wherever it can be quantified, and stay within the stated word limit. Assessors are looking for evidence, not claims.
Yes. If you are early in your career or changing sectors, examples from volunteer work, community roles, or study projects are acceptable — provided they are specific, structured using STAR, and genuinely demonstrate the required capability. The quality and specificity of the example matters far more than whether it came from paid employment.
Use examples from your private sector, not-for-profit, or academic experience. Government assessors are skilled at mapping private sector experience to public sector capability frameworks. Focus on transferable behaviours — stakeholder management, analysis, communication, leadership — and use specific examples that demonstrate those behaviours regardless of the sector they came from.
Always address all essential criteria — failing to address even one will result in your application being rejected regardless of how strong your other responses are. For desirable criteria, you should address them if you can, as doing so strengthens your application. However, if the instructions say desirable criteria are optional and you have a strong example, address it briefly rather than leaving it blank.
Federal APS roles are assessed against the APS Integrated Leadership System (ILS) or the APS Work Level Standards, depending on the classification. State government roles use their own frameworks — the NSW Public Sector Capability Framework, Victoria's Victorian Public Sector Capability Framework, Queensland's Leadership Competencies for Queensland, and WA's Leadership Expectations framework. The STAR method applies equally to all of them.
Use the example answers above as structural models, then make them your own by substituting your real experience and specific results. If you need help getting started, ProfessionalResume.au's Selection Criteria Writer generates structured STAR-method responses tailored to Australian government capability frameworks — just paste the criterion and your background. You can also scan your resume with our free ATS Scanner before you submit to make sure your application language matches what the employer is looking for. For the complete process from finding a role to submitting your application, see our guide to getting a government job in Australia.
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Alex Charter
Career Expert & Founder, ProfessionalResume.au
Alex Charter is a career specialist and the founder of ProfessionalResume.au, Australia's AI-powered career operating system. Based in Perth, WA, Alex specialises in ATS optimisation, Australian resume writing, and career tools purpose-built for the Australian job market.
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